Comments on: Bridge http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/ Official Home Page of Author, Christopher Chartrand Fri, 16 Mar 2012 21:09:35 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Eric J. Krause http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-934 Eric J. Krause Mon, 14 Dec 2009 16:49:26 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-934 Good story. Revolutions have to start somewhere. I'm interested to see if there are other pockets of society out there. Good story. Revolutions have to start somewhere. I’m interested to see if there are other pockets of society out there.

]]> By: Linda http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-932 Linda Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:07:37 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-932 Great juxtaposition between archaic and modern. Loved the 'gave the town a giant wedgie.' Dialogue fabu. Peace, Linda Great juxtaposition between archaic and modern. Loved the ‘gave the town a giant wedgie.’ Dialogue fabu. Peace, Linda

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-931 Deanna Schrayer Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:07:35 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-931 I definitely want to know more about this group Chris, and hope you plan to post more installments as part of #fridayflash. Great job with characterization here. I definitely want to know more about this group Chris, and hope you plan to post more installments as part of #fridayflash. Great job with characterization here.

]]> By: ganymeder http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-929 ganymeder Sat, 12 Dec 2009 20:57:30 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-929 I liked the tone of this story, pretty light and flippant considering it's post apocalyptic and dealing with such heavy subjects. You walked the line perfectly. Brilliant. I liked the tone of this story, pretty light and flippant considering it’s post apocalyptic and dealing with such heavy subjects. You walked the line perfectly. Brilliant.

]]> By: Fairweather Lewis http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-926 Fairweather Lewis Sat, 12 Dec 2009 04:24:14 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-926 Like everybody else, I love the character development and that last line--a classic! Good one, Chris.:) Like everybody else, I love the character development and that last line–a classic! Good one, Chris.:)

]]> By: Susan Cross http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-925 Susan Cross Sat, 12 Dec 2009 02:31:26 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-925 I love pieces where the dialogue stands on its own. You develop the characters by using their own words and that's not easy to do. I love the last line. I love pieces where the dialogue stands on its own. You develop the characters by using their own words and that’s not easy to do. I love the last line.

]]> By: Carrie Cleaver http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-923 Carrie Cleaver Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:15:11 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-923 What a great world-building piece. Within a few sentences I got a really good picture of where we all were. The inside statements to the reader were a nice touch. What a great world-building piece. Within a few sentences I got a really good picture of where we all were. The inside statements to the reader were a nice touch.

]]> By: Marisa Birns http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-922 Marisa Birns Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:07:41 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-922 This story made me laugh all throughout! Clever, quirky, mad as a hatter... You knocked this one out of the park. :) This story made me laugh all throughout!

Clever, quirky, mad as a hatter…

You knocked this one out of the park. :)

]]> By: Laura Eno http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-921 Laura Eno Fri, 11 Dec 2009 22:58:35 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-921 I loved their unschooled mangled words and this line 'You’re just a dickhead bully who’s basically given the town a giant wedgie for years' cracked me up. Wonderful story. I'd like to read more. I loved their unschooled mangled words and this line ‘You’re just a dickhead bully who’s basically given the town a giant wedgie for years’ cracked me up.
Wonderful story. I’d like to read more.

]]> By: Craig Daniels http://thedarkeagle.com/bridge/comment-page-1/#comment-920 Craig Daniels Fri, 11 Dec 2009 22:02:34 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=171#comment-920 who hasn't wanted to talk to the powers that be like that... good story Chris, and that last phrase "It's all just too much work" brought a smile to my face... Thanks for sharing with fridayflash.... who hasn’t wanted to talk to the powers that be like that… good story Chris, and that last phrase “It’s all just too much work” brought a smile to my face… Thanks for sharing with fridayflash….

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