Comments on: Bump

By: Laurita

Laurita — Thu, 18 Feb 2010 20:52:21 +0000

LOVE the ending.

By: Eric J. Krause

Eric J. Krause — Tue, 16 Feb 2010 22:42:23 +0000

Very well written. Good story.

By: Skycycler

Skycycler — Tue, 16 Feb 2010 12:23:20 +0000

Existential, especialy this: “I swear to God, I swear to Sandra but they’ve both gone and left me here alone.” And these two plus coke are necessary for the formation of proper reflections. Good, concise picture Chris.
Simon.

By: CJ

CJ — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:55:28 +0000

Amazingly poignant in such a few lines – very impressive.

By: ganymeder

ganymeder — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 23:04:18 +0000

Well written and moving, especially about how they all left him.

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 12:28:46 +0000

Short and tragic. Very well written. The hopelessness of both of them comes through well.

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 10:49:45 +0000

The last 3 sentences pack a sledgehammer punch. Nicely done

By: Cascade Lily

Cascade Lily — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 02:36:59 +0000

Ouch. Short but not sweet. You paint a very painful picture with just a few short lines. Very well done.

By: Linda

Linda — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 02:35:27 +0000

Excellent, honest face of an addict. Great job, Chris. Peace, Linda

By: Jennifer Hudock

Jennifer Hudock — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 02:11:53 +0000

I love the last line about how he can’t even see himself in the mirror anymore. It’s metaphoric on so many levels. Fantastic!