Comments on: Duce In The Machine http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:33:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Eric J. Krause http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-435 Eric J. Krause Tue, 29 Sep 2009 17:35:25 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-435 She'll be more impressed with him showing up in Paris anyway. Just the airport? Nah, she'll see right through that. Great story! She’ll be more impressed with him showing up in Paris anyway. Just the airport? Nah, she’ll see right through that. Great story!

]]> By: mazzz_in_Leeds http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-432 mazzz_in_Leeds Mon, 28 Sep 2009 14:08:40 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-432 Haha, nooooooo! Tell him that faint heart never won fair lady - to Paris he must go! Haha, nooooooo!

Tell him that faint heart never won fair lady – to Paris he must go!

]]> By: Rosa Say http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-430 Rosa Say Sun, 27 Sep 2009 06:23:21 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-430 Well, on the bright side, he'll get to see Paris! It's a great place to kiss and make up (or so I hear). Well, on the bright side, he’ll get to see Paris! It’s a great place to kiss and make up (or so I hear).

]]> By: Greta http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-426 Greta Sat, 26 Sep 2009 17:31:18 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-426 Just when you thought the course of true love would run smoothly... Nice job, Chris :) Just when you thought the course of true love would run smoothly…

Nice job, Chris :)

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-424 J. M. Strother Sat, 26 Sep 2009 04:19:09 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-424 Well done, Chris. Had us thinking his problems were solved and then Bam! Sorry. Clever. I think he should ask for the tip back. ;) ~jon Well done, Chris. Had us thinking his problems were solved and then Bam! Sorry. Clever.

I think he should ask for the tip back. ;)
~jon

]]> By: Alan http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-423 Alan Sat, 26 Sep 2009 02:57:39 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-423 The engine's racing but the car ain't going nowhere. Metaphor for a lot of things in life! The engine’s racing but the car ain’t going nowhere. Metaphor for a lot of things in life!

]]> By: Laura Eno http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-421 Laura Eno Sat, 26 Sep 2009 00:56:08 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-421 Ahh, man! Well, the engine IS running... Poor guy/instant karma. :) Ahh, man! Well, the engine IS running… Poor guy/instant karma. :)

]]> By: judy b. http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-420 judy b. Fri, 25 Sep 2009 23:34:45 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-420 I'm with Linda - I loved this line: A terrible metal on metal symphony tells me the engine is dead. And the ending is perfect; you don't fix a major f-up - compounded by a public internet apology - by proposing marriage. Duce ex machina! I’m with Linda – I loved this line: A terrible metal on metal symphony tells me the engine is dead.

And the ending is perfect; you don’t fix a major f-up – compounded by a public internet apology – by proposing marriage. Duce ex machina!

]]> By: Mark Kerstetter http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-419 Mark Kerstetter Fri, 25 Sep 2009 23:06:13 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-419 Oh no! The ending is awful, and that's why it's perfect - you make the reader feel the guy's frantic helplessness. Excellent. Oh no! The ending is awful, and that’s why it’s perfect – you make the reader feel the guy’s frantic helplessness. Excellent.

]]> By: Jodi MacArthur http://thedarkeagle.com/duce-in-the-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-418 Jodi MacArthur Fri, 25 Sep 2009 22:00:10 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=91#comment-418 that's what I call running in place! ra ra ra sock him in the jaw. So, like, what happens next, huh? that’s what I call running in place! ra ra ra sock him in the jaw. So, like, what happens next, huh?

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