Comments on: I Seek http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:33:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: 2mara http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-211 2mara Thu, 27 Aug 2009 21:28:21 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-211 Chris, I gave you an award on my blog http://www.2mara.com ~2 Chris, I gave you an award on my blog http://www.2mara.com
~2

]]> By: Dan Powell http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-210 Dan Powell Wed, 26 Aug 2009 10:23:29 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-210 I'm even later..... a tender, thought provoking piece. Slim yet dense. I’m even later….. a tender, thought provoking piece. Slim yet dense.

]]> By: 2mara http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-209 2mara Tue, 25 Aug 2009 23:00:48 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-209 I'm a little late... sorry. This is short but sweet. I am incredibly anxious... I hope he finds her soon. ~2 I’m a little late… sorry.

This is short but sweet. I am incredibly anxious… I hope he finds her soon.

~2

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-208 J. M. Strother Tue, 25 Aug 2009 12:59:15 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-208 Liked this one, Chris. Full of hope and new resolve. Almost poetry. Sorry it took me so long to get around. Had a very busy weekend. ~jon Liked this one, Chris. Full of hope and new resolve. Almost poetry.

Sorry it took me so long to get around. Had a very busy weekend.
~jon

]]> By: Jeff Posey http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-206 Jeff Posey Mon, 24 Aug 2009 17:07:46 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-206 Chris: In the best of flash fiction, as Pippa points out, this is prose poetry. Loved the feeling of counting forever (foolishly and without result) before he sets off to find her. Stop counting, dude, and chase her down! Chris: In the best of flash fiction, as Pippa points out, this is prose poetry. Loved the feeling of counting forever (foolishly and without result) before he sets off to find her. Stop counting, dude, and chase her down!

]]> By: Ronda Levine http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-205 Ronda Levine Mon, 24 Aug 2009 15:35:07 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-205 I agree with Pippa, this piece has a very prose-poetry-esque feel to it. I really enjoyed it. :) I agree with Pippa, this piece has a very prose-poetry-esque feel to it. I really enjoyed it. :)

]]> By: This Blog Of Mine http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-203 This Blog Of Mine Sun, 23 Aug 2009 23:54:29 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-203 HMMMM Very emotional! I lost a good wife to a younger man at one time. When reading your peace, it sent me back to the days that I was waiting, counting the days till she'd come back, but finally I also lifted my head from the bend of my elbo, waiting and mourning for her for so long, I finally had to quit counting and waiting simply because I realized I'd be better off without her. To put it simply true love would have never ended the way this did. It wasn't love at all on her part. What a beautiful peace you have here. I applaud your writing ability. Larry Moon HMMMM
Very emotional! I lost a good wife to a younger man at one time. When reading your peace, it sent me back to the days that I was waiting, counting the days till she’d come back, but finally I also lifted my head from the bend of my elbo, waiting and mourning for her for so long, I finally had to quit counting and waiting simply because I realized I’d be better off without her. To put it simply true love would have never ended the way this did. It wasn’t love at all on her part. What a beautiful peace you have here. I applaud your writing ability.

Larry Moon

]]> By: Pippa Hennessy http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-202 Pippa Hennessy Sun, 23 Aug 2009 14:32:03 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-202 This is prose poetry, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Full of beautiful language and imagery. For me, one of the most powerful bits is the very first word - 'Today...' This is prose poetry, and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. Full of beautiful language and imagery. For me, one of the most powerful bits is the very first word – ‘Today…’

]]> By: Tammy http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-199 Tammy Sat, 22 Aug 2009 05:09:16 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-199 This was very gripping, I felt like they were holding onto someone and finally letting go for that release. Great job! http://tammy-justtammy.blogspot.com/2009/08/fiction-friday-summers-passion.html This was very gripping, I felt like they were holding onto someone and finally letting go for that release.
Great job!
http://tammy-justtammy.blogspot.com/2009/08/fiction-friday-summers-passion.html

]]> By: Tiffany http://thedarkeagle.com/i-seek/comment-page-1/#comment-198 Tiffany Sat, 22 Aug 2009 01:07:27 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=68#comment-198 Very emotional. I loved this line: I lift my head from the crook of my elbow where I buried it all those years ago and open my eyes. Hopeful. I like that. Very emotional. I loved this line: I lift my head from the crook of my elbow where I buried it all those years ago and open my eyes.
Hopeful. I like that.

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