http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:33:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-115 Dan Powell Tue, 28 Jul 2009 07:47:12 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-115 The link between these characters is what made this work. The idea of a dead comrade coming back for the man left behind is a nice twist on the cliche. I'm intrigued as to what happens next to Dawson. Intriguing piece with enagaging characters. The link between these characters is what made this work. The idea of a dead comrade coming back for the man left behind is a nice twist on the cliche. I’m intrigued as to what happens next to Dawson. Intriguing piece with enagaging characters.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-110 Ryan Bradford Mon, 27 Jul 2009 05:47:21 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-110 I really liked the banter between the captain and William at the beginning of the story. Funny how he doesn't let death get a word in inch-wise. I really liked the banter between the captain and William at the beginning of the story. Funny how he doesn’t let death get a word in inch-wise.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-109 Stephen Book Sat, 25 Jul 2009 13:45:27 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-109 Very cool story. The revelation was handled well, the ending satisfying. Good stuff. Very cool story. The revelation was handled well, the ending satisfying. Good stuff.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-108 J. M. Strother Sat, 25 Jul 2009 04:30:43 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-108 Interesting twist about midway through. Nice job. ~jon Interesting twist about midway through. Nice job.
~jon

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-107 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:56:18 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-107 I'm glad to hear it wasn't too cliché. I try not to get to obvious with my 1000 word allotment. It's not always easy to do. I appreciate your comments. I’m glad to hear it wasn’t too cliché. I try not to get to obvious with my 1000 word allotment. It’s not always easy to do. I appreciate your comments.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-106 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:53:38 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-106 Thank you Craig. I'm glad I was able to pull you into the story. Thanks for commenting. Thank you Craig. I’m glad I was able to pull you into the story. Thanks for commenting.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-105 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:53:08 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-105 Thank you very much. I have always been a fan of the birth/death juxtaposition. Thank you very much. I have always been a fan of the birth/death juxtaposition.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-104 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:51:39 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-104 Thank you Laura. Flash fiction is a challenge. Hopefully I get it right once in a while. Thank you Laura. Flash fiction is a challenge. Hopefully I get it right once in a while.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-103 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:50:38 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-103 Thank you Jen. I glad you felt he emotion. Thanks for commenting. Thank you Jen. I glad you felt he emotion. Thanks for commenting.

]]> http://thedarkeagle.com/new-recruit/comment-page-1/#comment-102 admin Fri, 24 Jul 2009 21:49:46 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=51#comment-102 Thank you Lysa. It is a bit like Dead Like Me, but without Mandy Patinkin dropping the F-bomb. :) Thank you Lysa. It is a bit like Dead Like Me, but without Mandy Patinkin dropping the F-bomb.

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