Comments on: Ranger Six

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 12:23:45 +0000

Okay, you can add me to the list of people who will be calling for your blood or the rest of the novel on Dec 1st

By: admin

admin — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 04:13:14 +0000

Oh Linda, make no mistake. It’s pretty abysmal. I cleaned this passage up for #fridayflash.

By: Linda

Linda — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:37:08 +0000

Cool. Multi-genre stuff happening here.

I’m rather envious that your first NaNo draft reads so dang well; mine suckolas. I’ll buddy you in NaNoland… Peace, Linda

By: ~Tim

~Tim — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 23:03:29 +0000

Now I want to be a park ranger more than ever!

By: Cascade Lily

Cascade Lily — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 03:24:46 +0000

I nearly laughed out loud when I read they were park rangers – I had expected some crack squad known only to the Pres. There’s some serious Fargo-ism going on here!

By: Mark Kerstetter

Mark Kerstetter — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 21:49:01 +0000

Banging gavels, brass badges and clacking boots – like some of your other stories, it has the feel of a good old western.

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:05:18 +0000

I want more, more! Great story!

By: Eric J. Krause

Eric J. Krause — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 17:33:55 +0000

Great little piece of the story. As the others have said, that wet the apatite for the rest of your story, but this clip also stands great on its own.

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 17:21:36 +0000

You tease. Now I want to know more. Left me with lots of questions that need answers. That’s a pretty effective tease. Nice job.

I’ve not had much success trying to buddy people on NaNo. I’ll try and try again. Good luck!
~jon

By: Deanna Schrayer

Deanna Schrayer — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 15:42:35 +0000

Chris, you do know you’re going to have to post the whole novel on Dec 1, right? You are such a great storyteller, and Ranger Six is no exception. I love how you brought Roosevelt in, and with such vigor.
Great job!