Comments on: That’s Ok Willy

By: Amy

Amy — Fri, 23 Apr 2010 06:59:23 +0000

Hmmm, I wonder what he has in store for Monica. Nice story, very smooth and you led us right were you wanted us! ~ Olivia

By: ~Tim

~Tim — Tue, 30 Mar 2010 14:27:02 +0000

I gotta wonder what Monica saw in him. He believed that Wally would not hold a grudge and that business of the special hunting shoes? Not the brightest crayon in the box….

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Mon, 29 Mar 2010 00:55:40 +0000

That’s okay. I think Willy’s a candidate for the Darwin Awards for believing that Wally wouldn’t hold a grudge.

By: ganymeder

ganymeder — Sun, 28 Mar 2010 15:38:09 +0000

This just goes to show you shouldn’t go out into dangerous situations with someone you’ve cuckolded. Well written.

By: Icy Sedgwick

Icy Sedgwick — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 17:22:50 +0000

Ooh I like! Good use of dialogue, and setting.

By: Olivia Tejeda

Olivia Tejeda — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 14:53:29 +0000

Hmmm, I wonder what he has in store for Monica. Nice story, very smooth and you led us right were you wanted us! ~ Olivia

By: Cathy Olliffe

Cathy Olliffe — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 13:51:14 +0000

Dialogue was awesome… great how you used it to carry the story.
I hope Monica was worth it…

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 12:02:40 +0000

Yep, I knew he was a goner when the sleeping with Monica was mentioned. It was great fun reading on to see what tactics Wally would deploy

By: Fairweather Lewis

Fairweather Lewis — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 00:33:04 +0000

YIKES!!!! Good one!

By: marc nash

marc nash — Fri, 26 Mar 2010 22:39:38 +0000

The hunter becomes the hunted and with good reason. One less in the camp of survivors, but that logic can’t displace old grudges and the need for vengeance. We’re doomed as a race really aren’t we?

marc nash