Comments on: The Eye Candy Also Flies http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:33:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Tim Remp http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1075 Tim Remp Fri, 15 Jan 2010 17:06:27 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1075 That was a great read! The jokes were spot on.. -Tim http://timremp.blogspot.com/ That was a great read! The jokes were spot on..

-Tim
http://timremp.blogspot.com/

]]> By: David G Shrock http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1057 David G Shrock Tue, 12 Jan 2010 19:54:08 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1057 Nice. I enjoyed "Of Panties and Pirates" better. It felt stronger and the humor had more kick. Nice. I enjoyed “Of Panties and Pirates” better. It felt stronger and the humor had more kick.

]]> By: Eric J. Krause http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1053 Eric J. Krause Mon, 11 Jan 2010 16:32:17 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1053 Good voice in this. I liked the back and forth between the characters. Good story! Good voice in this. I liked the back and forth between the characters. Good story!

]]> By: Laurita http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1052 Laurita Mon, 11 Jan 2010 12:20:09 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1052 This was fun. You have created some very intersting characters here. :) This was fun. You have created some very intersting characters here. :)

]]> By: Jodi Cleghorn http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1051 Jodi Cleghorn Sun, 10 Jan 2010 02:38:04 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1051 These characters are definitely winners and you've woven so many untied ends into this, you must be promising more? For instance, if he wasn't part of the crew - what's he doing on her ship? Love slave? The dyamic between these two is brilliant. As others have pointed out- the cow/milk, the crotch, the red finger nail - all fantastic artefacts within the story. These characters are definitely winners and you’ve woven so many untied ends into this, you must be promising more? For instance, if he wasn’t part of the crew – what’s he doing on her ship? Love slave?

The dyamic between these two is brilliant. As others have pointed out- the cow/milk, the crotch, the red finger nail – all fantastic artefacts within the story.

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1049 Deanna Schrayer Sat, 09 Jan 2010 19:09:53 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1049 I too am glad you've brought Devon and Jessie back Chris - what a fun couple! I laughed throughout at the one-liners, just super, quick-paced dialogue. More, more, more! I too am glad you’ve brought Devon and Jessie back Chris – what a fun couple! I laughed throughout at the one-liners, just super, quick-paced dialogue. More, more, more!

]]> By: Laura Eno http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1047 Laura Eno Sat, 09 Jan 2010 15:30:26 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1047 These characters are awesome! Love the push me - pull you interaction between them. I'm glad you brought them back. These characters are awesome! Love the push me – pull you interaction between them. I’m glad you brought them back.

]]> By: Dana http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1045 Dana Sat, 09 Jan 2010 14:11:24 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1045 Also, I nominate this for best title of the week! Also, I nominate this for best title of the week!

]]> By: Dana http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1044 Dana Sat, 09 Jan 2010 14:08:43 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1044 Awesome! Most of the #fridayflash I've read so far this week has been on the heavy side so some fun (and well-written) adventure was just what the doctor ordered :) Awesome! Most of the #fridayflash I’ve read so far this week has been on the heavy side so some fun (and well-written) adventure was just what the doctor ordered :)

]]> By: dan powell http://thedarkeagle.com/the-eye-candy-also-flies/comment-page-1/#comment-1042 dan powell Sat, 09 Jan 2010 11:20:16 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=184#comment-1042 A treat to find another story from this corner of the universe. Lust, spacecraft and piracy. What more does a story need. A treat to find another story from this corner of the universe. Lust, spacecraft and piracy. What more does a story need.

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