Comments on: The Hunted http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/ Official Home Page of Author, Christopher Chartrand Fri, 03 Feb 2012 00:02:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: C. A. Beninati http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-660 C. A. Beninati Wed, 14 Oct 2009 02:04:08 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-660 A great passage with just enough details! A great passage with just enough details!

]]> By: ganymeder http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-659 ganymeder Wed, 14 Oct 2009 01:36:07 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-659 I love the rhythm of this. Awesome. Also, I thought at first this was a horror story, maybe a guy caught out by werewolves or something. Then thought the prey was a rabbit. Then the prey turned into I-dont-know-what. Love it. I love the rhythm of this. Awesome.

Also, I thought at first this was a horror story, maybe a guy caught out by werewolves or something. Then thought the prey was a rabbit. Then the prey turned into I-dont-know-what. Love it.

]]> By: mazzz_in_Leeds http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-656 mazzz_in_Leeds Sun, 11 Oct 2009 14:14:38 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-656 I too loved the short sentences, very pacy and tense! Loved the last paragraph. One minor point - "They fall one by one by my feat." <-- should be "feet", surely? I too loved the short sentences, very pacy and tense!
Loved the last paragraph.

One minor point – “They fall one by one by my feat.” <– should be "feet", surely?

]]> By: 2mara http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-655 2mara Sun, 11 Oct 2009 14:01:17 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-655 Oh Wow! It moved so fast, and it was so vivid... I was having trouble catching breath. Awesome story. I am such a fan, ~2 Oh Wow! It moved so fast, and it was so vivid… I was having trouble catching breath.

Awesome story. I am such a fan,
~2

]]> By: Eric J. Krause http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-654 Eric J. Krause Sun, 11 Oct 2009 06:40:41 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-654 I was wondering at first if it was a fox hunt told from the fox's point of view. Obviously not. Much more dangerous than that. Great story! I was wondering at first if it was a fox hunt told from the fox’s point of view. Obviously not. Much more dangerous than that. Great story!

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-653 J. M. Strother Sun, 11 Oct 2009 05:15:40 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-653 Good piece of flash, Chris, as always. The short sentences worked very well. The repetition in the first two paragraphs also adds to it nicely, though it's good you dropped the technique after that. You got it just right. I also love the fact that you don't tell us what he is. Excellent. ~jon Good piece of flash, Chris, as always. The short sentences worked very well. The repetition in the first two paragraphs also adds to it nicely, though it’s good you dropped the technique after that. You got it just right. I also love the fact that you don’t tell us what he is. Excellent.
~jon

]]> By: Mark Kerstetter http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-651 Mark Kerstetter Sat, 10 Oct 2009 20:13:21 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-651 The variety of responses is intriguing. It also looks like a portrait of any wild and fearsome animal - a wolf, a bear, a tiger. There's no morality in the violence. I enjoyed it a lot. The variety of responses is intriguing. It also looks like a portrait of any wild and fearsome animal – a wolf, a bear, a tiger. There’s no morality in the violence. I enjoyed it a lot.

]]> By: Michael J. Solender http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-649 Michael J. Solender Sat, 10 Oct 2009 14:24:13 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-649 scary. tense and cool. scary. tense and cool.

]]> By: Dan Powell http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-648 Dan Powell Sat, 10 Oct 2009 12:00:32 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-648 Tense piece. The last line really drives home his need to run to save their lives as much as his own. A sympathetic look into what drives a 'monster.' Tense piece. The last line really drives home his need to run to save their lives as much as his own. A sympathetic look into what drives a ‘monster.’

]]> By: ~Tim http://thedarkeagle.com/the-hunted/comment-page-1/#comment-646 ~Tim Sat, 10 Oct 2009 01:35:01 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=118#comment-646 Oh, I HATE when that happens. I guess we shouldn't have felt too sorry for the creature. Oh, I HATE when that happens. I guess we shouldn’t have felt too sorry for the creature.

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