Comments on: The Knocker http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/ Official Home Page of Author, Christopher Chartrand Fri, 03 Feb 2012 00:02:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Laurita http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2143 Laurita Wed, 16 Jun 2010 21:05:37 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2143 I like that he waited for him to come knock on his door. Smart character. I like that he waited for him to come knock on his door. Smart character.

]]> By: Lauren Cude http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2138 Lauren Cude Tue, 15 Jun 2010 16:41:27 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2138 Intense. Great creation of fear and sadness for Callie, and suspense for the narrator. Well done capturing the feeling of knowing you should do something and being unsure exactly how or even if you should do it. Intense. Great creation of fear and sadness for Callie, and suspense for the narrator. Well done capturing the feeling of knowing you should do something and being unsure exactly how or even if you should do it.

]]> By: karenfrommentor http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2120 karenfrommentor Mon, 14 Jun 2010 18:58:43 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2120 You knocked this out of the park Chris. I found myself hoping that the narrator [and it's interesting that you don't give the narrator a gender until the last line] swings open the door and uses the split second of suprise to bury the knife into something meaty. You did a great job of portraying the end of the rope scenerio that pushes the non violent to violence. Great work. Karen :0) You knocked this out of the park Chris. I found myself hoping that the narrator [and it's interesting that you don't give the narrator a gender until the last line] swings open the door and uses the split second of suprise to bury the knife into something meaty.
You did a great job of portraying the end of the rope scenerio that pushes the non violent to violence.
Great work.
Karen :0)

]]> By: ~Tim http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2116 ~Tim Sun, 13 Jun 2010 14:30:34 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2116 Scary and sad. I like how they "just happen" to be around each other when he tries to talk to her. Scary and sad. I like how they “just happen” to be around each other when he tries to talk to her.

]]> By: Fiction Round Up XVI | Chinese Whisperings http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2114 Fiction Round Up XVI | Chinese Whisperings Sun, 13 Jun 2010 08:15:36 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2114 [...] Chris Chartrand’s “The Knocker” [...] [...] Chris Chartrand’s “The Knocker” [...]

]]> By: Peggy http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2112 Peggy Sun, 13 Jun 2010 03:13:19 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2112 A knife's probably not the right choice, but at least he's choosing. Better than just listening and never trying. I'm glad I stopped by. A knife’s probably not the right choice, but at least he’s choosing. Better than just listening and never trying. I’m glad I stopped by.

]]> By: Susan Cross http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2108 Susan Cross Sat, 12 Jun 2010 20:45:41 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2108 I'll repeat what I said about Jon's story. I saw this on the news last night. Again. This crazy world! We wouldn't be writing stories like this if they weren't happening around us. Good job in the telling. I’ll repeat what I said about Jon’s story. I saw this on the news last night. Again. This crazy world! We wouldn’t be writing stories like this if they weren’t happening around us. Good job in the telling.

]]> By: PJ Kaiser http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2107 PJ Kaiser Sat, 12 Jun 2010 19:40:48 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2107 Chris - this is harrowing. Good, tight writing and nice descriptions. I agree with the idea of getting more firepower ... i wish him luck. Chris – this is harrowing. Good, tight writing and nice descriptions. I agree with the idea of getting more firepower … i wish him luck.

]]> By: Gracie http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2106 Gracie Sat, 12 Jun 2010 19:27:09 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2106 Goodness. Nothing makes me lose my mind more than noisy neighbors, though none of mine are quite like this. :) Slice him up, narrator. Great story. Goodness. Nothing makes me lose my mind more than noisy neighbors, though none of mine are quite like this. :) Slice him up, narrator.

Great story.

]]> By: 2mara http://thedarkeagle.com/the-knocker/comment-page-1/#comment-2103 2mara Sat, 12 Jun 2010 16:09:43 +0000 http://thedarkeagle.com/?p=301#comment-2103 Wow. You gave me goosebumps. I can only wish for a happy ending, but I know they don't exist in reality. Great post! ~2 Wow. You gave me goosebumps. I can only wish for a happy ending, but I know they don’t exist in reality.

Great post!
~2

]]>