Comments on: The Lunar Gate

By: Jen Brubacher

Jen Brubacher — Tue, 01 Jun 2010 08:32:55 +0000

*laughs!* The spooky atmosphere had me fooled until Aunt Bertha said, “Jaaaaack…” then I knew something had to be up. Very fun.

Annie — Tue, 01 Jun 2010 03:09:03 +0000

As always the twist at the end is NEVER what I expect.. and I keep double guessing and STLL get it wrong…
great ‘ghost’ story….

ganymeder — Mon, 31 May 2010 16:27:28 +0000

I’m grinning ear to ear. Delightful.

Julie (Okami) — Mon, 31 May 2010 14:10:34 +0000

ROFLMAO!!

Icy Sedgwick — Sun, 30 May 2010 20:44:02 +0000

Ohmigod! How embarrassing!!!! Wonderful way to twist the expectations though. Very well done, sir!

2mara — Sun, 30 May 2010 14:22:48 +0000

hahaha. The photo freaks me out.. a lot. I was on edge the whole story. Great job.

He was afraid, but ended up traumatizing everyone else…. too funny!

Sam — Sun, 30 May 2010 10:57:46 +0000

Hilarious! I love Aunt Bertha, she has the best lines.

Eric J. Krause — Sat, 29 May 2010 23:04:44 +0000

Well, he can’t say she didn’t warn him. Good story!

PJ Kaiser — Sat, 29 May 2010 22:15:07 +0000

Spooky build-up indeed – I was expecting something much more sinister fun story!

Marisa Birns — Sat, 29 May 2010 17:21:13 +0000

This was brilliant! It had such a sinister air, and I was sure that Jack was going to die a watery death.

But then, a relief of laughter!

I bet Jack wished that Aunt Bertha would have given him fashion advice in his dream.